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Yeah Jordan you have so many grammar mistakes I wonder why you're top set school

each animal has a purpouse, should be purpose cannot bare it for it destroys familys, should be families why cage animals when we should cage our selfs, should have a ...

:P A big black bad bug bleeds black blood from its bladder and it shudders when it waddles to it's 'mudder' and it's name is Adder and it gets more ...

ok it's got lots of grammatic mistakes, for example when you are writing in first person it was supposed to be capital 'I' and don't do capital 'S' when you ...

i'm new here and where do i uplaod pictures so ican make people see it and comment on it?

I meant competition not prize

Horrid Henry's Plant Competition Henry was in class, not really listening to Miss Battle-Axe. "Drone, drone, drone drone, plant, drone, drone, competition, drone, prize," she droned. Horrid Henry sat

Yeah this story was very good :D Is it going to continue? Let me know because I would like to read more of this material. My favourite character is Merlyn

No you person you said paralysed is spelt wrong? Well it isn't, 'paralyse' is the English spelling and probably you are in USA but they have much better in England

It doesn't really rhyme, but if it wasn't meant to, you could have just said

“Nick,” said Colin, “why don’t you go and distract the dinosaurs while we try to find the time machine?” “But I can’t do that,” Nick replied, “I’m too short. Mr ...

Ok but where shall I continue the story?

In school we had this homework assignment and we had to write this science-fiction story. Well, here it is: P.S. This story has real-life people from my school's name so ...

I agree with everyone else and it was a bit good, but somehow I didn't like it. :S

it was a really good start of a story. I would like to read more. :lol: