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Re: Twenty miles outside of town
Thanks for the comment timjim. Neverending has a dash in the middle.
Sep 22, 2006 -
Re: Twenty miles outside of town
I'm still working on it. Twenty miles outside of town, I walk down that winding road. Crossing the borderline, paved in stone. Twisting and turning, reminds me of how life ...
Sep 14, 2006 -
Re: The biggest memory of all
That's exactly what i wanted to write for that sentence, but i couldn't find the right word to add between thinking and where. Thanks Tanis :D
Sep 12, 2006 -
Re: The biggest memory of all
I need your help! I’m currently writing a poem - it’s about a couple who broke up at a young age and then reuniting five years on. I’ve written the ...
Sep 11, 2006 -
Re: These words...
Here's an activity i've thought about, i'm sure people know this one. I couldn't see another topic like this, so i thought i'd start it. Use these five wordsbelow to ...
Sep 11, 2006 -
Re: Dreamscape
Thanks for the lovely comments :D I'm curenntly editing the whole thing. I should post some more up soon though :) I love Rions art too Myth
Sep 11, 2006 -
Re: Dreamscape
Dreamscape is a fantasy book which i'm currently writing. An agent has showed interest in this and so, i thought i'd share it with you. For twenty years, she neglected ...
Sep 6, 2006 -
Re: Shamefully, I know all the words
I know all the words too, 'Baby one more time' - Britney Spears :oops:
Jan 22, 2006 -
Re: Having trouble!
I hope someone could help me out with this one... I got one week to submit a short story to my tutor... seems easy, right? Well, i'm having trouble conjuring ...
Jan 22, 2006 -
Re: (the smell of Fear, now): The Shadow.
I liked the idea of this piece. However, I noticed a few mistakes: 1. I notcied in the second parapgraph, you quickly changed point of view. From the man to ...
Jan 20, 2006 -
Re: The steps to Heaven
The title, The steps on the Stairway to Heaven Is far to long (seven words), It doesn't really sound right. usually a title is no more then six words, even ...
Jan 19, 2006 -
Re: A New Sun Has Risen
Johann passed a note to his classmate behind him. “Psst,” he whispered, “Give this to Sieglinde.” Johann pretended to read his book. He gulped and loosened the tightness of his ...
Jan 18, 2006 -
Re: Yep, I'm new!
Hello Peeps. My name is Ginny; I'm from wet and windy England. lol I accidentally stumbled into this site after searching for some good writing forums. I have been writing ...
Jan 17, 2006
