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Re: lost in thought
Hi geebee! I'm Kat, and I'll be reviewing, okay? :) Now, as Amy has mentioned, just by looking at the poem you can see that the flow will be messy. ...
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Re: Friendship
Hi Forgotten! How are you? I'll be reviewing this. I'm Kat, by the way ^.^ So, first thing I'd like to point out: one thing that really got annoying throughout ...
Jan 11, 2010 -
Re: Gifts
Hi Flyer! I'm Kat, and I'll be reviewing ;) So, there's really just one thing I'd like to point out, since there has been many things mentioned already. It is ...
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Re: War Stories
Hi Hawk! I'm Kat, and I'll be reviewing, 'kay? So, the first thing I noticed here, structure wise, it that you have every first word capitalized. While some people might ...
Jan 11, 2010 -
Re: Boarding School [2]
Bolt's still around. And cross your name out of your list, we all still need Adam ;)
Jan 11, 2010 -
Re: Death Clock
Hi Flower Child! How are you? I'm Kat, and I'll be reviewing this ;) Now, I really like this. The rhyming scheme gave it a little funny tone, that made ...
Jan 11, 2010 -
Re: Shades of Black and White
Melissa Race? Seriously? That's an... uncommon name. To say the least. I decided not to comment; what would I say, anyway? And then he asked a question. "Hum, I don't ...
Jan 11, 2010 -
Re: Shades of Black and White
*sorry, short post. It's laaate, and I gotta go* Melissa - Human "Hum... you wanna take a seat?" What was this guy doing, standing around and talking to her all ...
Jan 10, 2010 -
Re: Shades of Black and White
*Nope, Juni. Feel free ^.^*
Jan 10, 2010 -
Re: Shades of Black and White
Melissa - Human I had no desire of getting up and going to school. Not a single shred of that. No, my real want was to stay home and drown ...
Jan 10, 2010 -
Re: Shades of Black and White
*has no idea of what to post*
Jan 10, 2010 -
Re: Boarding school DT
YESH! Lizz is showing some support and tomorrow I'm gonna kick Shauni into posting. And I noticed Jok was back around, so if maybe someone could PM him. And bolt ...
Jan 10, 2010 -
Re: Boarding School [2]
Marianne I followed Seth as he burst into his room, and unfortunately we ran into Nick. And then all of a sudden, Seth had hit Nick. I launched myself in ...
Jan 10, 2010 -
Re: Love is a Fools Game
Hi Janay! I'm Kat, and I'll be reviewing this. So, first off I'd like to talk to you about flow. Because, for me, this poem if very hard to read, ...
Jan 10, 2010 -
Re: Boarding School [2]
Noooooo. We gotta make it to page 20 D: Just reply to the above, I guess. Matt's in jail =P
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