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Re: Playing The Field - Chapter 6
I liked it. I really like the story . i'm a fan of typical high school romances (what can i do?). Didn't found any errors (i'm not english so i ...
Nov 10, 2008 -
Re: Not All is a bed of Roses chptr.1
OK so this is pretty basic. I don't use a rich vocabulary in this kind of text because as it has a narrator that's a high school student I don't ...
Nov 9, 2008 -
Re: Unloved- Prologue (edited)
As everyone else have said I liked it. I'm really sorry i can't give you much opinion but it's a great them and indeed it's a question i have always ...
Nov 9, 2008 -
Re: Heart's Illusion (Working Title) Prologue
I liked it! i like you're use of describing (even if i don't know the context) and above some errors (who am I to speak? I don't write very correctly ...
Nov 9, 2008 -
Re: A tale unforgotten
I really liked it. i think you've done a good job! my opinion may not count much but I hope it might help you. i particulary like Waking the dawn, ...
Nov 9, 2008 -
Re: How?
OK... so this is a simple one... I purposefully used "how" repeatedly, hoping I could transmit the despair. Anyway here it goes! Comments are welcome (even the harsh ones) to ...
Nov 9, 2008 -
Re: Playing The Field - Chapter 5
Hi! I just wanted to say I really like your story. I know i'm just a newbie, but I think it's good. And i also think a good story doesn't ...
Nov 9, 2008
