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Thanks! :D i worked for it... LOL

My soul has shred to pieces, my heart has burned to ashes, my tears are meaningless, as they run every single day; Full of sadness. My thoughts are only yours. ...

Couldn't find anything minimally wrong. I honestly and simply loved it. The two versions worked together and i think it was a great idea to show the two sides of ...

Twilight... loved the books. I must admit, when I first saw this I wasn't sure if it was any good. Then I read it and I loved it! It really ...

Loved it. You use your vocabulary very nicely, say what you want, put feeling into it and make it flow together, It's an awfully good skill :D Loved the second ...

Ah... i don't know. I mean we never dated. We... I don't know what we were. And one day suddenly I never saw him again. Then i found out he ...

Hi! nice work, I like it. But i this time I have to agree with someone (I don't recall) that said you were making a big problem out of wearing ...

Ok... you're right! I mean, I am a teenage , but that's not an excuse. i completely agree with you. thanks I'll try to make it better!

I like. Simple, clean and meaningful. Take my hand and lead me to a new life Not broken, just damaged Loved this one. nice work for your first poem. Keep ...

It really made me sad... In other way it's good! i liked how you used vocabulary like you were the little girl that was being abused. Nice work (even if ...

Another one of my poems... Hope you like it! And comments are welcome to correct, give tips, say it stinks, anything that might help me! LOL _______________________________________ How come I ...

Loved it! Like Kelsi222 said it's short, but size doesn't make quality. tears almost filled my eyes as i saw the emotion on your words. keep up with the good ...

I liked it. It's short but it ends right. I particularly love the end. In my opinion nice work! :D keep on the writing!

Ok... I write a lot of poems. Mostly in Portuguese but I also write in English because I think it has words that I can put more feelings into that ...

I loved it! it's well built, shows feelings and thoughts but still has a story. Very nice! :D