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Loved it. A person would thing that if anyone would make a poem like this (i mean the structure that's always the same) and this long, it would surely be ...

I really liked it, like everyone above. But (and here it comes) i agree Riedawriter23. It was short, but it flow well. You could have developed it a little bit ...

Loved it! Great! And you're voice here sound better... You posted this on my birthday LOL That doesn't matter anyway. I loved it! Keep working I think if you work ...

I loved it! The lyrics are good and so is the music. I'm sorry if I'm going to seem mean but you're not a vocalist. There were some words you ...

Loved it. Loved the way you worked with the words and make it flow really nicely. Very original and it seemed like you really were at war with someone. This ...

So here's the next chapter! Hope it's at least ok... :D Reviews are welcome... If you find any error please notify me I can't really tell since English isn't my ...

yeah you're right. I mean she had reason to be mad even if she didn't had the right to be. they weren't dating (even if they wanted, the first step ...

Ahhh... so sweet... Loved it. You made it work out very nicely. In my opinion, you write very well, just one thing. She got too mad about him being kissed ...

thanks. you were right about the mistakes. thanks again for the review :D

Hope you like it! If Galerius reviews on this one saying it's crap again I'll assume you have something agaisnt my poems! ____________________________________ Broken dreams Are my thoughts every momen

LOL that was hilarious! Everything that fell on Bella made me laugh! Antartida, that was a great one! Not screaming just capital letters xD My favorite part was: EDWARD: Yeah, ...

*sniff, eyes wet* Omg... what will happen next? She's really mad/sad (with reason). I kindda feel sorry for him. He lost the girl he liked, his friends turned his back ...

OK... harsh but true. Just want to say something: first it wasn't a one-week it was six years. Second I have friends, i have family and I do have happy ...

OMG! How could he? After that night, and how everything was going! *heart racing, scream* AHHHH! He... and the other ... *can´t speak properly from the shock* Anyway, good one. ...

i liked it :D it's well strutured and the words flow right. i think that's what i have too say. hum... just one question: trough all your poem you onlymention ...