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Very well written as the others have said! I must advice you to something: writing about things that you don't know much about or didn't experienced may be hard. I ...

as the others have said you should improve a little bit your grammar. Anyway, I liked it but it really did sound a bit rushed. It was very deep. And ...

Hum... interesting. It really hurts when a friend lets you off like that, doesn't it? Anyway, I liked it. it flow well and rhymes were good. I didn't find any ...

Ok... I love depressed feelings poems! I write too. I mean if I feel this way how can I write happy poems if I'm sad? Anyway, this isn't about me! ...

Here it is! Chapter three... really hope it doesn't suck! :D ________________________________________________________ 3. Under the tree At five o’clock my last class ended. As I walked to the bus st

Hi! :D I really like this, it's a great start. I'm not sure if I like Julian or not LOL his attitude pisses me off a little but i think ...

i liked it... a bit disturbing, but hey I know how you fell [:D] I support the idea above of rhyming alive with something else (it seems hard i know, ...

Loved it. As mizz-iceberg has said, I thought it could be a bit boring because the description was "last kiss" and that's a very common theme (I should say). it ...

Ok... I liked it ! My favorite part was: And my choice if death is on my side [shouldn't it be: And my choice is, if death is on my ...

thanks! i will read and review your poems any time soon :D

Oh! I would be so honored... *wide smile, teacher looking at me knowing I'm not working as I should :P* I can't wait!!!! What would happen between these three? A ...

I liked it. Your first attempt was definitely a success and I think the second might be too! It's a shame you won't be able to write so soon, because ...

LOL good point of view. thanks for noticing that mistake. It's like he wasn't a guy to me. He was a friend. And that just makes it worst. Anyway, thanks ...

WOW!!! OMG!!! *too exited, heart beating too fast* I think the ending was great! it surely does make room for a sequel! OMG! The ending did not suck! it was ...

Someone told me wealthy was something under rich. LOL I'm going to review it. thanks for the help!