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Re: Back in his Arms..
Hi there! You may think I'm pursuing your poems, but I'm really not. your poems they just stumble in my way :D So, I'm not even going to mention the ...
Dec 6, 2008 -
Re: Angel from Above..
Oh... so sweet and nice, and cool, and... have I said sweet? :D Hey there! I'm on a review marathon, and I think I have reviewed one of your poems ...
Dec 6, 2008 -
Re: The Sytem
Hi! First of all welcome to YWS! :D Hope you have much joy here :D Onto to the review: Don't really know what to say. I mean, it was a ...
Dec 6, 2008 -
Re: [deleted]
LOL that was funny! So, just wanted to point out something: Red welts on my arms when they cut me out of it. My mother bit her lip, eyeballed my ...
Dec 6, 2008 -
Re: I Love You
Oh so sweet! LOL I liked it (as everyone else) :D Loved the vocabulary, it was mentioned before, but it's great. :D :D :D Anyway, great work! keep on writing! ...
Dec 6, 2008 -
Re: It ain't all sweet
I didn't write this. The words just stumble out, so... I'm not responsible if this is really, but really bad! :D (getting excuses for being a lousy poet, but this ...
Dec 6, 2008 -
Re: Gratitude..
Hi there! I must tell you I'm a grammar freak (and proud to be one) and those I's are just freaking me out! You should really capitalize them all! LOL ...
Dec 6, 2008 -
Re: Some people
Thanks both for the reviews! I'm going to review it and hopefully improve it :D
Dec 6, 2008 -
Re: Some people
This could be good, this could be bad. i think a poet doesn't always have a great poem. He or she can have bad times too. So if this is ...
Dec 6, 2008 -
Re: Dead And In Love
Oh... so depressingly sweet. :D Loved it! Didn't find any grammar errors just wanted to point out something: My feelings never disappeared, and now they can't just disappear. This kindda ...
Dec 4, 2008 -
Re: Remember
Oh... how sad and depressing. loved it! :D As everyone seems that were rude enough to read but not to review, I will! :D Liked the repetition, it sounded well. ...
Dec 4, 2008 -
Re: Another Day Awake
Loved this! It was great! You captivated the reader (at least me) and I'm hard to captivate. When I see a poem that has the same format every stanza and ...
Dec 4, 2008 -
Re: Along the way
LOL So if you were young, why didn't you reviewed it before post it now that you're older but not old (lol)? Anyway that's what I think. You have to ...
Dec 4, 2008 -
Re: Just Because
Hi there! You may think I'm stalking you, but I'm really not... So, now the review! Why do we fight ? Why cant we just get along ? Just because ...
Dec 3, 2008 -
Re: I'll Fly Away
Hey there! Nice work... On to the review! The first line it sounds a bit... well... boring. Don't take me wrong, it transmit the feeling, but to a normal person, ...
Dec 3, 2008
