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hey there! This was so sweet... even if the point wasn't to be sweet :D Anyway, this was good, it was like a first teenager love, and getting over with ...

Thanks both for the reviews! i will review it and take your advice in as best as i can. :D

Hey there! Welcome to YWS! F«irst of all I have to ask: Did you post this on the wrong categorie? because it seems so. Poetry has it's style and you ...

So because of reviews saying this suck, I decided to DELET it. Sorry for the inconvenient

hey there! i really liked this. this is a good poem. :D i guess that's all i have to say... Didn't find any grammar mistakes, neither i would change a ...

Hi! So, you said you wanted my (well, not particularly mine, but the readers) opinion, so here it goes: Loved it :D Favourite lines: Never worry about tomorrow, or fret ...

Hey! I'm gonna be your reviewer for this poem. So, first of all I liked it. But there's some things you should correct. Why can't I stop loving you? It's ...

Hey there! First of all welcome to YWS! :D Okay, so on to the review: I agree with Jiggity :lol: Late. Never early. This is very poor, since if he's ...

Hey there! There's not much left to say since elephantwalrus said it all. These poems are short, but nice too read. You did a good job, but you better watch ...

Hi there! First of all I have to ask you: do you have OCD? It's because a poet should almost never talk about something they have no experienced. Either way, ...

Hi there! On to the review: I agree with Ducati in most things. I actually do like the third line :D The rhyming scheme... well, you can have it both ...

Hi there! Interesting.... I liked this. I just have some suggestions (you don't need to listen to them :D): They are attacking the trees and the houses, And surrounding the ...

Hi there! WOW O.O You really caught me on this one! After the second stanza, I just couldn't stop! Very captivating. I liked it! I really did liked it :D ...

Hi there! Good work, I liked it. But.... G ames,laughter and joy all of them I have , but I am alone. Friends, both girls and boys I have , ...

I don't care what the others might say but I loved it! You described exactly how I feel every time I play the piano! *sniff* I nearly cried! Of course ...