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Hey there! After so much replies I have nothing else to add... sadly, I won-t be much of a help to you... Anyway, just wanted to say I still love ...

hi there! This is good! I completely love it :D I didn't find any grammar or punctuation mistakes, but I should advise you to not use a comma on the ...

Hi there! this seems nice... kind of a first love thing, pretty basic. I didn't find any grammar mistakes and punctuation is nicely done (congrats on that, most people don't ...

hey there! First of all, this is good a bit generic but good. But your form is all wrong! You can't use this kind of structure in poetry. poetry is ...

Hi there! I agree with everything above, but I definitely loved this! But I am a grammar freak so to improve your poem, your grammar must be correct 8not only ...

This is really good. it reminds me of Roald Dahl, named Cinderella. LOL Anyway, good work and keep writing!

hey there! I completely get you... The friends at school, that expect you to resolve their problems give advise and to you never hurt and have always a smile on ...

Hey there! really, really but I mean REALLY good! At least for me... Anyway, one of my favs! And I'm hard to please so be happy, you've done a good ...

Hey there! This one is about how I feel when I play the piano. :D I wrote this because I wanted to. Reviews are welcome, I don't mind if they ...

Hey there! This is sooooooo good! it has a good story line, emotions, thoughts, depth. it lacks a bit on the rhyming but not every poem needs t rhyme (but ...

Hi there! So, on to the review! I liked this. it was okay/good :D Didn't find any grammar mistakes but something could have slipped. The surrounding darkness doesn’t help no ...

Hi there! I got to say this was just okay... It's a bit poor in depth. The times you said "She said" and " And he said", this is not ...

hi there! I'm gonna review this.... but I'm not sure what to say... First, a question: Is this supposed to be like the numbers before the line in every stanza ...

Completely changed my mind! :D :D :D i absolutely loved this :D

hey there! This is soooooo cute!!!!! *huge smile* I hate her guts, even though he doesn't. this is a bit confusing since, it's the first time (and last) that you ...