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This has no specific structure or rhyming structure. I just listened to a piano song that inspired me to this. Say it's sucks, say it's okay. Judge it as you ...

Hi there! I'm Kat and I'm gonna review this for you (over all). this is really good. You expressed an ordinary matter in such an unique way. The words are ...

Ha ha! Meep you should get impulses more often! I love reading your hilarious scripts! Meyer's character was completely hilarious! And yours as well! :D Gold star to Meep!

that was freaking funny! You had me laughing through it all! this was awesome! Favorite part: EDWARD: Ya, well… Look Bella, I’ve been thinking. You know, with me being a ...

OMG! I'm really sorry for her... she doesn't know what she got herself into. great chapter. You're hilarious. You had me laughing through this one. Hum, i didn't knew that ...

hum... seriously? no one got what it was about? i saw it coming from the third stanza. In the end, she gives in to death right? At least that was ...

*sniff* that was the most sad, true, and real poem I have ever read from a 13 year old boy. First of all, welcome to YWS! You will have much ...

Hi there! This is good, really good. It's real. Down to earth. I could see everything you were trying to describe. The rhymes were pretty good. Are your hero You ...

Sad. True. Amazing. Gold star.

Hey there! Welcome to YWS! This has good potential. but it needs a bit of revision. I'm gonna do some suggestions. You don't have to change it. Or maybe use ...

Hi there. I'm really sorry if this is going to seem harsh. This is actually... bad, in my opinion. it's empty. i couldn't feel what you felt. I couldn't see ...

To my best friend. This is for you. Judge it as you want. Be harsh, don't be. Hate it, love it. I'm here because of her. I only care for ...

Hey there! I liked this. I can relate easily to this. I agree with everything above. I don't have much more to say... I sit back down on the bathroom ...

hey there! i'm so happy my work has inspired someone :D LOL Anyway, I really like this. Even if I'm a writer and my opinion on this kind of work ...

Thanks again for all the reviews! Shauni: I don't want to be bragging but you ARE MY BFF so you kindda now my work :D Thanks again! :D