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  • Narrative Poetry Re: Promises

    Okay, kind of cliché, I'll give them that, but it was incredibly sweet. I finished it saying 'Awww' out loud, so you may see the effect it had on me. ...

    Jan 18, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Suffering

    Hi Lydia! Well, I liked this, but the period were effective while I didn't like them at all. Yeah, I'm weird. Just an opinion, though! Plus, there were some word ...

    Jan 18, 2010
  • Archive Re: Boarding School [2]

    come on, you always have crazy dramatic ideas =P

    Jan 18, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Senseless Love

    Hi Ben! Sorry for the delay. Dinner and... hum... life got in the way >.< As you mentioned in the poem, there are some parts that don't, in fact, make ...

    Jan 17, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Love's Desire

    Wow, after that awesome review from Selene, I'm not sure I can tell about much. The thing that bothered me the most about this was: first, its lack of originality. ...

    Jan 17, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Even Though

    Hi Matthew! I'm Kat ^.^ So, I kind of like this. You're wondering why I didn't love it :P I'll tell you. So, I agree with Sakura above, not all ...

    Jan 17, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: soul-less blue eyes

    Hi sobebomb! I'm Kat, and I'll be dropping a quick review, okay? So, my biggest issue with this was that it all seems too forced, rhyming wise. As if you're ...

    Jan 17, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Shriveled Rose

    Oh, Angel, you always blow me away with your poetry. I wish I could write like that. As always, you're imagery here is amazing. I can actually see everything your ...

    Jan 17, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: The Girl On The Red Swing

    Hi Jayden! I'm Kat, and I'll be reviewing, okay? So, first off, I really liked this. It was a very cute, simple poem, yet it had meaning that flowed with ...

    Jan 17, 2010
  • Romantic Novels Re: Thorns & Roses [6]

    Cucumber is simply a hilarious nickname xD I'll comment like that. And I'd also like to add, that you're taking this story very lightly to us, as if it flows ...

    Jan 17, 2010
  • Welcome Mat Re: Ahh....hi?

    Hi Rebecca! I'm Kat, nice meeting you! Welcome to YWS! *throws confettis* I agree with you xD I absolutely fail when there's no romance in stories. I'm a soft heart ...

    Jan 17, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Losing Love

    Hey Sanareth! I'm Kat ^.^ So, as Snoink, I didn't really liked the first stanza. They're only questions, and those can be tricky in poetry. But! They can also be ...

    Jan 17, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Memory.

    Hi Ray! I'm Kat, and I'll drop you a quick review, okay? You know how we, reviewers, go on and on about showing, not telling; and how one of the ...

    Jan 17, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: I Hurt To Love You (revised)

    Hi Rinta! How are you? I'm Kat, and I shall review now ^.^ So, first I'd like to warn you about a thing I'm sure you have already heard: this ...

    Jan 14, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Heart of a poet

    Hello Melvin! I'm Kat, and I'll be reviewing, okay? ^.^ So, I really liked this. You made a poem about a poet that sounded like written by a poet and ...

    Jan 14, 2010


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