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Lily, you're brilliant. And to throw in something helpful, the last line of the second stanza feels too long. Nonetheless, you rule. =D

Peanut, you're awesome. Enough said.

Someone with an avatar that awesome deserves a review! xD Good evening! I'm gonna drop a quick review. So. I actually really like this. Not really sure I understood half ...

Hey rememberme! Surprisingly, I enjoyed this! I was expecting to see a rather cliché poem, you know, with all that romance stuff we've all read a thousand times. I'm not ...

Haha, this is so sweet xD Made me cheery and want to do NaNo this year too.

Hey there Danielle! I'm Kat and I'll be giving you a quick review, okay? ;D Alright, so the biggest issue I found with this was how the ideas were tied ...

Hey there Brian! Welcome to YWs, I hope you have lots of fun here ;D

... I wish everyone was still around to do so xD

Hey, Flit, I just noticed, you cut the first stanza! Why? =|

Hey Flit! Unfortunately, I have very little to say on this. This is for the single reason that, in my opinion, it seriously is a good poem. I love the ...

I have made two reviews and I'm trying. I guess I'm back? >.> - Kat

Hello! Honestly, this surprised me very much. I saw the title and I was ready to read something cliché and boring, but no! This was lovely, definitely. The flow was ...

Hey BlackDahilia! I'm Kat, and I'm going to do a quick review ;D Okay, so, first off, this is sort of short. Which is okay, you don't want to drag ...

You get to be slapped with a fish. *inserts coin*

*pokes Jon with poetry poking stick* Heeeey Jon! Kat's dropping by for a quick review, 'kay? So! Let's see what I've got on this. I liked very much, but that's ...