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Coffee, I say! Any coffee.

Hey Angel! As ever, I'm a huge fan of your poetry. Always the simplicity of it, with the detail and emotion. There is nothing I see wrong with this poem, ...

This shall be an utterly useless post, but I only want to share that I agree wholly with your review and it was a clear, simple (and yet, emotional) way ...

Hello Andrea! Welcome to YWS! I'm Kat, nice to meet you ;D Wow, you've completed a novel already? Amazing! Don't be afraid to post your work here and I'm sure ...

Hi Juni! I'm gonna jump all over this, alright? I think I shall nit pick first, if you don't mind. I rather miss nit picking >_> She walked down the ...

[A/N: Wohooo, first piece in centuries >_> Any comments will be greatly appreciated since I really do need my weakness pointed out. Also, 12+ because of ... death? Meh.] There ...

Hey darkangel! First off, I think I'll sound a bit harsh, but I'm only trying to help. My first impression of the poem was not a good one; I thought ...

Hello Kit! I'm afraid I don't have much to say! I quite enjoyed this poem, the flow was wonderful, and the description combined with the variable vocabulary was refreshing. I ...

Hello kimalane! Well, I found only two bigger issues with your poem, none directly related to grammar or anything like that. The first, I have to say, is that most ...

Hello mollycarraway! So, I rather liked your poem. The only thing that bothered my quite a bit throughout it was the rhythm - the way the poem is cut. It ...

Then, I do believe the best thing to do would be creating a new storybook with the same concept and carry on the legacy ;D EDIT: Oh my God, 14 ...

*cough* You guys all know everyone is pretty much gone? =|

Hey Angel! I'm glad to see your poems back up, I've always loved them. And with that, I can state I am not disappointed. I enjoyed this very much, it ...

Hey Pen! Quick review, not much to say. As Lily and Jabbs have said, the repetition is sort of annoying. And here we go again with mouths. I actually don't ...

Lizzifer~~ =D Marianne "RUN!" I screamed at them all. Were they stupid? The fellow had a gun. And he had... he had shot me? I passed my hand over where ...