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I enjoyed your description of this mysterious, somewhat forboding character. I think it leaves a lot unanswered but in a good way that leaves me wanting to continue. I have ...

I like this. At first I thought it odd that you called them gods as opposed to just some different species or mutation thereof. But, it is an interesting idea ...

"Nothing's for certain, In this crazy world We live in, " Someone else commented on this saying that it didn't quite work. They suggested that you take out "we live ...

I really like the analogies to water here, and how they mean different things yet are a connected whole. "This is your moment to play in the puddles" a beautiful ...