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I have now split the story into Parts 1 and 2. If you think it needs more alteration, please let me know

Stella, you are a genius. Thank you so much. I will update and edit before the next installment

Aww! How cute! I loved it, Pickle. I hope you're better and keep writing! P.S I've written a post of thanks for my Sleeping Beauty story in which you're mentioned. ...

Thank you everyone, particularly Pickle 810 and Stella Thomas who have continued to comment and review the story. I'm really enjoying writing the next chapter, if you want to see ...

Hi Saint Razorblade. First of all, what a cool name! :D I have now changed the formatting after your complaint (and many others too) and hopefully this should clear up ...

Thank you so much to everyone who's commented or reviewed so far! However I NEED MORE REVIEWS! MORE COMMENTS! ANYTHING! The BIG chapter is coming next so I need ideas ...

Hi, thanks bkwrm. I will certainly change it before it is sent off to prospective publishers, I think that the reason the story is so repititive is because I wrote ...

Hi Everyone! I have added a new paragraph or two if you want to read it!

This has a fantastic beginning to what I'm sure will be a masterpiece. But call me pernickety, 'was was' is a simple mistake. *lilmisswritergal*

Ok, thanks pickle. I'm not very good at writing in first person cos I get confused. I usually write in the third person, so I think I'll have 'Rora' writing ...

Sorry, one tiny itsy bitsy thing 'Ferocious Lightning' no capital letter needed for 'lightning' *lilmisswritergal* otherwise known as the rather bored and depressed Holly

Thanks very much, I thought it might be better than just letting her wake up on her own. This is the first real link to the fairytale, as Mallory the ...

Hi everyone, if you just check from where the last sentence left off, I have added some more. Please review and don't forget to SMILE! It just makes me feel ...

Yeah, I have to say, your grammar is excellent, and as I said before I LOVE the kingdoms and the characters, everything fits together really well, as a published book ...

Hi Stella, those names aren't the best ones, there are more to come. Also, do you or does anyone else think that I should change the name of the school? ...