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Of Loss and Love: chapter two Love is a friend, a fire, a heaven, a hell, where pleasure, pain, and sad repentance dwell [Richard Barnfield] I awoke the next morning ...

Let me start off by saying I too had the same fear you had. I NEVER let ANYONE ready my work because I was scared that it sounded rubbish but ...

This sounds really, really cool! Firstly I love the way your narrating the story because it truly feels like you are actually narrating a story to us the readers. Your ...

Let me start off by saying this is really good so far and I look forward to reading more. I just have one thing to touch on. It's always good ...

Thanks so much, I was starting to think no one was going to review! I'll be sure to send you the next part, I'm planning a lot of drama!

Of Loss and Love: chapter one Love is a friend, a fire, a heaven, a hell, where pleasure, pain, and sad repentance dwell [Richard Barnfield] The Elders of the Eastern ...

Thanks for the reply, Amy! LOL I'll include all these in my profile x

This is so beautiful, simple yet deep. The emotions are really powerful and although we don't exactly why the girl and boy are in the situation that they are in, ...

I hope my first posted story will be as good as this! I think your use of 'he' was great because when you say that it intrigues the reader and ...

As a fan of the whole Ron/Hermione relationship the first part was difficult to digest lol but I have to say this was brilliantly written and really funny to read. ...

Hello everyone! I've been trying to pluck up the courage to join one of these online writing communities so today I thought I'd give it a go. I'm a new ...