*Twilight*

Thanks for the advice guys I will definately expand this but first I will spoof another poor unsuspecting victim. Bwahahaha!!

I had a lot of fun writing this so, I will definately be spoofing plenty of other movies out there. Keep an eye out for more Random Randomness I should ...

Thanks. I'm writing something more serious. But, I just can't stay focused on it right now. So when I'm bored I just write weird things like this.

Oh, stupid me. I probably didn't soak that up. I remember you mentioning that in the first chapter but, I forgot.

This is much better. You took Areida's advice and put it to work. *Applauds* Great job.

Hmm...I don't really know. Maybe try putting it in diferent words. Then it won't seem too cliche. It's just that many books and stories start with those very words. If ...

Yeah I have to agree, it seemed too cliche.

I think your last theorie is correct Kiashana. That's what I was thinking too.

Hmm.... Maybe it's always dark there.....I don't know.

Yeah I guess if you put it that way........

It dosen't look like it but, he might.

Good, because this is a story I am interested in reading.

So, when is pt 3 coming anyway?

This would actually make a good picture book for children. The worlds have many colors and lots of things to see so there would be plenty to draw. The whole ...

Well.....Shame on you for making me look like a fool. I honestly don't know what era it is set in there are no key words to make it obvious. Either ...