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    CClesta Trees--Chapter 1
    Dec 4, 2016


    Mageheart If you want to have a link to something, you can post the link directly or use this super useful code! ^_^
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    [url=link]name of whatever it is[/url]

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  • Hey, just wanted to share my latest work. Has a weird name, i know....:P "Trees" isn't gonna be the book's final title. It's just part of the title--which I didn't want to give away quite yet...It's even weirder.

    Anyways. Sorry. But yeah. The chapter's kinda long, but if any of you have a bit....I am really hoping for more reviews. I need multiple, to sorta get a more balanced idea of changes needed.

    What I need help with most probably is the atmsophere. It may be too....dramatic....Did I put too much description in there? Big fat words that sound ridiculous? Or what :/

    Thanks :) Plz let me know what you think, anyone.....if anyone's there..........But I'd like to know thoughts on my overall style. This is my first story I am really gonna strive to finish.

    CC


  • Mageheart
    Dec 3, 2016

    Congratulations on your first review star! ^_^


    CClesta Thanks! :) :) :)
    Dec 3, 2016


    Mageheart You're welcome! ^_^
    Dec 3, 2016


  • fukase
    Dec 2, 2016

    Hi!
    Finally some Patrick, but you aren't pink??
    Wait, you're @CClesta, that's explained it.
    Hmm, you're interested in piano, so yeah, I'm too. ^_^
    Welcome to YWS. Here are flowers for you.

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    CClesta Thanks :'D Yup, piano is my life :)
    Dec 2, 2016


    fukase My pleasure.
    What songs you personally like? I mean the kinds of song.

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  • Mageheart
    Dec 2, 2016

    Hi and welcome to YWS! I'm Mage! If you ever have any questions, feel free to come to me! ^_^

    Here's some helpful parts of YWS that can help you understand how things work on the site:

    Welcome Mat
    Knowledge Base - YWS
    FAQ
    FAQ For New Users
    YWS Critique Sandwich

    If I can't answer your questions, or I'm not on when you have one, you can always ask the users whose names are in green (moderators) or red (administrators). Other users would be happy to help as well! ^_^

    What type of things do you like to write? I write fantasy novels that are sometimes also mysteries, and enjoy writing realistic fiction short stories.

    Also, since this a really fun question to ask, where did you get your username from?

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    CClesta Hey, thanks! Definitely expect some stupid questions from me in the next few days, cause I'm still super new here :'D

    I made my username CClesta because friends call me CC, and "lesta" comes from my name, Celesta. I didn't want my username to be just CC, and so I thought CClesta would be interesting.

    Thanks for the follow! :)

    Dec 2, 2016


    Mageheart You're welcome! ^_^ And your questions definitely won't be stupid. ^_^

    That's cool! ^_^

    You're welcome! Thanks for the follow back! ^_^

    Dec 2, 2016



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