I likes the way you tell the story in your poems. Unless you're patterning after an old author or a friend I don't know of, I truly appreciated a break from the tone-dead vantage point!
Is sure you know what I mean. XD I just have oddly ways of phrasing things. I think of it as language hitting me at an uncommon frequency
Empires
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Empires Thanks a lot, really appreciate it! I haven’t really noticed that myself, but I do love having distinct characters in my poems and write from their points of view. What do you like to write about?
Jan 29, 2018
Wriskypump I like sci-fi, fantasy (but not like full-blown straight sci-fi just elements of it). And of course I like poetry that offers more of a solution or at least closure than simply being emotional or glamorously worded just for the sake of posing for a "beautiful flow."
So half the time I write anti-poetry which often doesn't rhyme or have the same flow from stanza to stanza
Jan 29, 2018
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It has been a while since I'd written and was wondering whether to return to writing again and to see such a positive response by YWSers with having both my works in the literary spotlight is so encouraging and has helped me to continue being inspired to write. Poetry - I'm here to stay
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I remember when pigeons feared people, but now they boldly walk you to you and stare like, where's the bread at? XD
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veeren i said also because i also meant to write a follow up comment also
Sep 24, 2016
Empires What was the follow up comment? XD And no problem.
Sep 25, 2016
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why do parents get mad when you sleep all day like I'm staying out of trouble and I'm not spending your money like what is the issue here
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Empires Thank you, thanks also for your kindness and helpfulness on the site
Sep 14, 2016
Mageheart You're welcome for all of that!
Sep 14, 2016
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I absolutely LOVE your picture! My username is after the Remington typewriter brand.
Empires Thanks, Ooh thats cool! I like your profile pic too.
Sep 11, 2016
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Hi, @Empires, and welcome to YWS! I'm Mage! If you ever have any questions, feel free to come to me!
Here's some helpful parts of YWS that can help you understand how things work on the site:
Knowledge Base - YWS
FAQ
YWS Critique Sandwich
If I can't answer your questions, or I'm not on when you have one, you can always the users whose names are in green (moderators) or red (administrators). Other users would be happy to help as well!
Also, (because these are such fun questions to ask) how did you find out about YWS, and where did you get your username from?
By the way, I love your avatar!
Empires I found out through a lucky google search XD. My username is from my favorite Album by a band called Hillsong. And thanks !
Sep 4, 2016
Mageheart You're welcome! That's a pretty cool way to come up with a username!
Sep 5, 2016
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