It hacked at it's prey, it wiggled and wormed as it's tore flesh from the bone. It grinned, blooding drizzling down it's chin and onto it's bare chest. The victim's useless cries of help. It lifted it's leg and pressed down on it's victims back until it heard the bones fracture. The poor helpless young women was pretty, with her long blonde hair and blue eyes. It leaned down to look its prey in the eyes. She sobbed as it pressed its talon clawed hand down on her throat.
It pushed down until she stopped whimpering and sobbing, until the last breathe left her body. It smiled it's twisted smile, he tore the women into shreds. Flesh and blood smeared all over trees and branches. It curved on the victims chest were there was some flesh left a symbol. It knew what it meant and it knew the person it intended it for would too.
LoneWolf161
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Shadowwriter1 Well done, your horror/gore has improved drastically. I must say i'm impressed. Congradulation.
Apr 30, 2013
noninjaes Grammar Nazi to the rescue!
*Congratulations.
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Love *pets*
Apr 26, 2013
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Sorry that I haven't been on but I will try harder and I'm starting all my stories again since I have improved
thanks
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Dragons Rain
Dragons Rain is about a young girl named Stalina Lynch is a Felguard a specially trained guardian for protecting Banshee's. At an early age it is drilled into their heads that Banshee's come first.
Stalina is sixteen and it's time for the kids to have some fun (as the adults calls it) as they all partner up with the guys and girls that graduated and now they have to survive a whole semester with them.
Stalina is having some problems with her parents, they don't want her to become a guardian but they can't change her mind... Her mother wants her to take her life seriously.
Through all the pain, heartache's and Forgotten love, Stalina promise's she won't fail, not now and not ever no matter what happens.
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http://www.fantasticfiction.co.uk/
you should check out this website it's all differeny books by every author
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noninjaes Hello.
Jun 20, 2012
zohali93 Hi
Jun 20, 2012
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School's going back on tuesday
P.S
I miss you so much Shadowwriter1 I wish you would come back your parents are so mean the reat of the gang miss you
noninjaes I miss her too. And her house has the worst reception, even worse than mine!
Apr 23, 2012
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hello it was Easter yesterday it was okay I mainly wrote any way so the day went in a blur
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I've got another book I usally write two at a time
dead dawn: red roses
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The Element Duardians 101
enjoy
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My internet is back up and ranning
any way back to the evening news........I'm joking
I've started a new book called Dead Dawn: Red Roses check it out
this is the thingie they put on the back of the books
Raska Polaroid is a sixteen year old girl who grew up in the shadow of her sister and her father until her father starts to noticing her her sister starts to get jealous is Raska willng to let eveything go to save the man she loves but what happens when she saves him will her heart break o will she marry him
found out in the first series of Dead Dawn: Red Roses
LoneWolf161 sorry stuffed some words up because my laptop is a stupid thing
Feb 25, 2012
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May 19, 2014
Checkout my Wattpad Account = Zaracat161 and my tumblr zaracat yet again (I think)
talk to you soon