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  • Mageheart
    May 21, 2018

    Happy birthday! I hope you have a wonderful day.


  • Mageheart
    May 21, 2017

    Happy birthday!~ I hope you have a wonderful day that's filled with joy - you definitely deserve it! ☆


  • Picklesole
    Mar 29, 2016

    Hello, if you could check out my new short story Sunflowers that would be great! Thank you!


  • Picklesole
    Jan 31, 2016

    Goal: get my fourth review star by the end of February. I've got to write 70 reviews in 28 days. Let's do this.

  • Your avatar is sweet! <3


    Picklesole thanks!
    Jan 30, 2016


  • Picklesole
    Apr 19, 2015

    I haven't been on here in ages my goodness

  • Happy Birthdaaaay!


  • mithrim96
    Dec 5, 2013

    Hello! Sorry but I just came across your profile pic and now I'm so happy to have found someone who actually seems to have watched myself yourself! I cosplayed as Nanaka (after the events of the series but before the '10 years later') recently and no one recognized me... So thank-you, for brightening my day :D
    Mith


    Picklesole Oh that's so cool! And haha no problem :)
    Dec 5, 2013


  • Picklesole
    Sep 23, 2013

    Hey people! So I have 9 reviews to go until I get my third star (I should have more but I've been known to take long breaks away from here, sadly, so I do not have more) so if anyone is looking for a good review on any of their works, I will gladly review! The Green Room is filled with novels on their ninth and twelve chapter and I don't have THAT much time so if someone could help me with my dilemma that'd be nice. :)


    Hannah You gotta start the novels! You can start out easy -- just read the first chapters. Then when you get up to the ninth or twelfth chapter, you're golden!
    Sep 23, 2013


    Picklesole I GUESS that's an option... :) But to really commit to it I'd have to have a lot more free time than I have now (I have especially difficult classes this year). But maybe I will do that, I haven't read any novels lately on here so that'd be interesting. :)
    Sep 28, 2013

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  • Hi there! you gave me that great Idea for "The Auction" and I changed it so there are expensive, worldly things for sale. I wanted to see what YOU thought first before I change it.

    Welcome to the Auction.
    We%u2019re very busy, see?
    Two souls are sold for iron,
    Makeup%u2019s a luxury.
    Hope is almost worthless
    Compassion is a deal,
    Jewels are very precious.
    The price of life, a steal.
    Popularity%u2019s exclusive.
    Someone bought the Earth,
    The cheapest merchandise is love.
    No one knows what it is worth.

    Do you think I kept the rhythm right and the rhymes?
    Thanks!
    ~Fortis


    Rook ugh. those things with the % signs are just apostrophes. stupid formating. >.<
    Aug 1, 2013


    Picklesole Ah yeah I figured. Hmm. I think there are strong points for both. For instance, in this new version, you're point was SUPER clear, therefore making it a stronger piece in general, you know? But I think that the original one was stronger in the fact that it's in the past tense, so maybe you could make this one past tense, as well? I think you kept the flow very well, but it hiccuped in one line, "Popularity's exclusive." because there is one too many syllables, which sucks because you only have two words in that line. Lastly, I personally feel you should keep "hearts" instead of "love", because it seems more true that people are less aware of people's hearts, than love, you know? Love is idolized, but people forget that their heart is where great, storybook loves originate, so they kind of skip the part about hearts, if that makes sense. So that's my reasoning on why you should keep "hearts." But I love what you added, the flow is great and the rhymes are as well, and best of all, it gives a simple and powerful (and very very true) message.
    Aug 1, 2013

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  • Hi! I know I posted the prologue a while ago, but I just posted the first two chapters of my novel, A Hero's Welcome. If you're still interested I would appreciate a read! :) Here are the links: chpt. 1 (work.php?id=101686) chpt. 2 (work.php?id=101687)


    Picklesole Yeah, I'm definitely still interested! I'll check those out as soon as I can. :D
    May 27, 2013


  • Picklesole
    May 27, 2013

    Guys help me I need a prompt or something, I have absolutely no idea what to write anymore. :/


    JonQuill You might find some inspiration in these pictures/the stories attached to them maybe . . . http://imgur.com/gallery/GhAzB
    May 27, 2013


    Picklesole Oh yeah wow those pictures are awesome, thanks! The stories are heartbreaking. :( I'll try to come up with something today? Err I don't know :/ Inspiration is not a benevolent force :)
    May 27, 2013

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  • Beautiful avatar! :) Who is she?? xD (Looks like Hinata from Naruto but probably not, hehe.)


    Picklesole Thanks! I don't remember her name, but I'm 98% sure she's from this anime called Angel Beats (that's partially why I chose this avatar) :D
    May 26, 2013


    Caerulean Thanks. :)
    May 27, 2013

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  • Happy Birthday!


    Picklesole Thank you! Also thanks for the follow! :)
    May 21, 2013


    BelleBeauty NO prob xD
    May 22, 2013


  • Picklesole
    May 18, 2013

    Okay. I'm back on YWS again. I guess I'll do my best to stay on? Yeah, that's what I'll do. Also, if anyone wants/needs a review, I'm happy to give one! :)



One believes things because one has been conditioned to believe them.
— Aldous Huxley, Brave New World