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  • Mageheart
    Apr 16, 2019

    Happy birthday! <3


  • Mageheart
    Apr 16, 2018

    Happy birthday! I hope you have a wonderful day.

  • Hey, I'm going to leave this here because most people don't check back on reviews they've done <3

    You reviewed my poem 'History' saying I needed to caps the first letter of each sentence. While some poets still do that today, there has become an agreement that it is not necessary. You can capitalize for sentences, lines, or even feel which might make nothing capitalized at all and any method of capitalization is considered a stylistic choice.

    For me, I tend to capitalize by sentence. I also tend to keep punctuation while other people leave it out. There are a lot of famous, published poems that do things both ways. This makes it near impossible to critique people on their punctuation or capitalization, but you can always say: 'I prefer to...' and that will make it less of a demand. You also have to back that up with why when you put it in a review.

    <3 Happy Reviewing.


  • theLockedLibrary
    Oct 30, 2012

    Finally back from a long journey, ready to dive right back into writing.


    creativityrules Go for it! Are you doing NanoWriMo?
    Oct 31, 2012


  • RenGrey
    Nov 29, 2011

    Hallo


    theLockedLibrary Hello ^_^
    Nov 29, 2011


    RenGrey How are you
    Nov 29, 2011

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  • Thanks for the review on my contest piece. I was debating whether or not to separate the paragraphs into regular novel-like paragraphs, or to separate them into individual drreams. I will go back and re-weigh the options because I agree, they are long. They do make sense though! haha Anyway, thanks again, and I will be sure to return the favor soon.


  • theLockedLibrary
    Nov 27, 2011

    Funny how movies can never compare to the book its was based off of.


  • Sianniiee
    Oct 29, 2011

    Love The User Name ;D <3


    theLockedLibrary Thank you! <3
    Oct 30, 2011


  • youngwolf1105
    Sep 28, 2011

    i just posted something! it's only a short prologue, but i'm building ya'll up! it's called My Dark Angel-Prologue

  • I was really hoping someone would get the reference, and you have no idea how happy I was when I saw that you did. xD Anyway, thanks for the review and the follow! :)


    theLockedLibrary And I'm really happy that you wrote about one of my favorite songs! =D Thanks for the follow back!
    Sep 11, 2011


    thatoddkid No problem. :)
    Sep 11, 2011


  • shiney1
    Aug 27, 2011

    Thanks for the comment on my drawing!
    And as far as dragons go, they are fantasy creatures, so there are millions of designs. Dragons can look like lions, other animals, be fat, skinny, have only one front and back leg, etc. So those designs are mine lol.

  • Thanks for the like!


    theLockedLibrary Oh no, thank YOU for the lovely poem!! =D
    Aug 18, 2011


  • rayhutch5
    Aug 14, 2011

    Thanks so much for the review of my poem! I really appreciate your opinion on it! :D


  • pettybage
    Aug 12, 2011

    Totally my pleasure! Feel invited to prod me when you have something else you think i should check out :)



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