speakingofsarah
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speakingofsarah yup!
Jun 29, 2011
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Sorry, my spelling is awful...you spelled balloons right, but I mean to drop the capital letter. After a semi colon you don't need a capital. I'll do a better post in a while with some suggestions - I was just being lazy this morning when I reviewed because I was writing it on my phone and was gettimg frustrated with the touch screen. Be in touch soon,
- Alia
speakingofsarah Hahaha ohh that makes sense, I'll fix that. Thanks!
Jun 28, 2011
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Thanks for the review! And for catching my missing opening quotation! It has now been remedied. Many thanks fellow writer!
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speakingofsarah thank you
Jun 28, 2011
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Jun 13, 2013