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No problem! I'm glad that it helped you!

Thank you so much for your review of Malice.
I appreciate the feedback, and understand exactly where your coming from with the points you made.

Thanks so much for the review. I see the weak spots now.

Thanks for the follow! *follows back* btw, is Retarded Fish your Killjoy name? Or do you just like retarded fish? XD

Thanks so much for the compliments on "Two Criminals". I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Thanks for the review!

well never again, and never again, they gave us to shots to the back of the head and we're all...dead...now.

Oooh got it! Lol, thanks, the poem makes a lot more sense. Upload more, you're good~

Hi,
First of all, thanks for reviewing. It is really appreciated!
And for your confusion, there's a line where I state Dennis doesn't
refute her denial. That was supposed to indicate that she's denying she remembers, when she actually does. Thanks for reviewing once again, and I hope I can return the favor in the near future.

Oh hey, how you been? Thanks for the review of Paradise, I'm really glad you enjoyed it

I AM CREEPING ON YOU

Again, thanks for the review of bob. Expect that level of quality from now on, I'm just that awesome
But seriously, thanks alot.

Hey, thanks for the review. I appriciate the feedback. To be honest, this is the first time I've let others see my work, so thank you.

Thanks for the comment on yellow sheets, glad you enjoyed it. Btw, greatest profile name ever lol.