WrittenInStone
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You don't look alive anymore, but I remember SBing with you. Happy Birthday! Those were great times.
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Hey, WrittenInStone.
I just posted Ch 1 of my Sci-fi novel. Working title is Elara.
You might be interested in reading it.
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Hey, how are you?
Sorry I took so long to get back to you about the piece you gave me a link to. Been so busy. I managed to catch a break to be able to review The Night's Game for you.
I tried to be thorough, but I focused on the words and instead of punctuation, as I'm still a bit of an airhead when it comes to punctuation.
It's my weakness which needs thorough working on.
But I hope my review is helpful, even though I think I confused myself at times there, if you have any queries about any of my comments please let me know and I'll explain it better.
It was a nice poem and I think the narrative was very dark and interesting.
Drop me a link if you post anything new.
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I read the first couple lines of 'The Night's Game' and I'll get to the rest of it as soon as I have some time. A bit busy at the moment. It sounds good so far, but I want to read it properly and give you a proper review which I can do once I've got everything else out of the way.
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Thanks so much Wisp. for taking the time to review, Malice.
I'm glad you liked it and enjoy my work. That's the point I guess, for people to enjoy my work, so I'm really glad you do.
I see the reason for the points you made and my sentences I realize do tend to be vague and unclear at times.
Thanks so much for taking the time to review. Drop me a link when you post some new stuff and I'll return the favor.
And thick book on politics? You better get reading. I'm stuck on a textbook about Semiotics. We both have lots of reading to do I think.
Good luck with it.
And thanks again for reviewing. I appreciate it.
WrittenInStone No problem, I always enjoy reading your work. I'll be posting up some chapters of the novel I recently finished writing. I'll drop the link later on, and yes. Politics are driving me insane. O.e
Jun 30, 2012
Butterfly18 Oh yay, lovely. I can't wait to read it. How long have you been working on it? The novel that is? I completed the 2nd draft of my sci-fi novel, and I started reviewing it and sorting out where to begin editing, but I haven't properly gotten to it yet. Too busy.
Drop me a link when you have chapter one up.
And politics, haha I couldn't think of anything more interesting, yet brain-numbing at the same time - for me anyway. I get excited about politics and then when I get into trying to study it, i get a sort of opposite reaction and it all goes south for me. Hope you get through it. It sounds like an interesting book.
Can't wait to read the novel.
Jul 2, 2012
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- I need to start reading the thick book on politics so I can move on with my books.
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Hey how have you been? Good I hope.
I've submitted a short story. You might be interested. Would love a review.
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Feb 4, 2022