Miyakko has been a member of the Young Writers Society since Jun 9 2010. They have made 190 posts and 165 reviews. Please take the time to welcome them to YWS!
No, it's not that you didn't succeed. You accomplished a lot, but, if you want to touch people, don't concentrate so much on rhyme and metre. Think more about what you want to say instead of how you're saying it.
— LCDR Geordi La Forge