Everyone you thought you loved,
and everyone you thought you trusted,
turned around to stab you,
with a knife that was rusted.
It's a very touching stanza. I enjoyed this one.
However, I must point out how... stiff your word usage is. Trying branching out, using more complex words. It will allow the poem to flow that much better.
~Panda;;
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