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Version 2
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He looks one way, she another
and then their gazes meet
while the world slows down for them
though people still rush past in ignorance.
Their eyes glance off one another
again lost in the sea of people
now never to meet again.
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Version 1
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He looks one way, she another,
their gaze meeting then glancing
and the world slows down for them
as people rush past in ignorance.
It's amazing they found each other again
in the midst of so many strangers
but who knows to appreciate such a miracle?
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Note
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Version 2 better?
:grr: I'll get around to rewriting/editing/etc. ... eventually.
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