A Time of Change

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Winter breeze wraps 'round
Autumn trees as cold air sweeps
Up yesterdays leaves.
Last edited by Nameless_And_Shamed on Sun Jan 08, 2006 6:00 pm, edited 1 time in total.




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Another good haiku. Good idea at least, but your first line is 6 syllables long.
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Oh, thanks.
I think I fixed it right.



I lingered round them, under that benign sky: watched the moths fluttering among the heath and harebells, listened to the soft wind breathing through the grass, and wondered how any one could ever imagine unquiet slumbers for the sleepers in that quiet earth.
— Emily Bronte, Wuthering Heights