New Story Idea Good or Not?

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We all know the story if Cinderella and to be honest remakes of the movie has gotten on my nerves, but recently I had an idea. This is not another remake of the Cinderella story but wither what happens the Cinderella's family after she marries her prince.

Okay so before all the happily ever after stuff and before there was an evil stepmother and stepsisters Cinderella's mother was pregnant and had another baby girl but shortly after that her mother died. Cinderella was still very young when all this was happening. So her father seeing that he now had a newborn and Cinderella without a mother he decides to marry again. A few years after that the father gets sick and dies leaving Cinderella and her baby sister in the hands of the "steps". Well the stepmother immediately took the baby to the orphanage but kept Cinderella to be their "slave" removing all the memories and anything of Cinderella's sister. So while Cinderella suffered her sister was growing up in an orphanage.

After Cinderella had her happily ever after the evil stepmother remembered Cinderellas sister. She went to orphanage and adopted her sister. Her sister was excited that someone wanted her not knowing that it was she who put her in the orphanage in the first place. Now the sisters and the stepmother began treating her sister like they did Cinderella. The girls name was Serena but the "Steps" were just as cruel as before and called her Sudsserena.

What do y'all think?
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I think this is a great idea.
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I think it sounds rather interesting, because I love fairytales! I also like twists on known fairytales, so go for it. Although "Serena" reminds me too much of Gossip Girl...
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That's a fantastic idea. I love it.
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Well the girl's name is Serena but the "step" called her Sudsy
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I would read it :) I love fairytales!
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Ok so I found that Serena would not be a good name for my character so... any ideas?
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