It's so pretty. :3 I'm so glad you linked to the background image; I'm totally going to keep that for later use in other projects because it's awegreat and so serene.
I really have only one major critique that'd possibly make this better. So. Look at the image; scan your eyes left to right, and see if you can see what's bugging me about the girl. Does it come through? Her being, her--while translucent--lines are harsh and defined a bit too much against the soft, white/black/blue/gray background. It's the addition of red tones that does her in. If you have her layer saved somewhere, try toning down the red, turning the spectrum a bit more to the blue/gray side--but not enough to where she has no contrast...just enough to where it isn't so much of a jagged edge, I suppose.
Anyway, I'm totally jealous of Lava! This is awesome, and I know she'll love it.
Hope this helps,
-Lumi
I am a forest fire and an ocean, and I will burn you just as much as I will drown everything you have inside.
-Shinji Moon
I am the property of Rydia, please return me to her ship.
First and foremost, I am awed for your technique of combining images because it looked as if the three images were originally one. Secondly, I was truly amazed because you combined those three images brilliantly that the togetherness see mutual.
Plus, I think it's a great idea to give someone a gift that you worked hard on on their birthday.
Kudos to your pics, Al
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