Elemental Cycle- Fireborn

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sylverdawn
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Thu Dec 01, 2011 12:00 am
sylverdawn says... · Thu Dec 01, 2011 12:00 am
I am currently writing a Fantasy Novel titled, Elemental Cycle- Fireborn.
I have six chapters completed and just posted the new draft of chapter 1.
Please review it, I need all the help I can get.

Here's the link to the thread.
topic64968.html

For those who enjoy what they read, PM me and chapter 2 will be posted next week.
DANCE- Like no-one is watching
LOVE- Like you've never been hurt
SING- Like no-one is listening
LIVE- Like it's heaven on earth.

Please read and review my novel. The title is Fireborn. Here's the link.

novel.php?id=1157
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Rosendorn
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Thu Dec 01, 2011 2:56 am
Rosendorn says... · Thu Dec 01, 2011 2:56 am
Heya! This actually isn't the place to ask for reviews. That's Will Review for Food. :) However, even in that forum general requests like this aren't allowed. You have to ask only a few people to review at a time.

If you want to turn this into a thread where you get critique in the idea, plot, ect, let me know and I'll unlock this. But, for now, this is locked.
A writer is a world trapped in a person— Victor Hugo

Ink is blood. Paper is bandages. The wounded press books to their heart to know they're not alone.
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As a former (and rather excellent) liar herself, Aru knew that, sometimes, speaking the truth felt like wrenching a thorn out of your side. But doing the opposite meant pretending it wasn't there. And that made every single step ache. It was no way to live.
— Roshani Chokshi, Aru Shah and the Nectar of Immortality