New Girl

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Hey everyone, I'm so excited to hear everone's opinion on my work and happy to review yours too. I'm a really young writer like alot of people in here are. So I'd appreciate the help in any grammars, punctuation, etc. I love to read vampire novels and plan on introducing my own series soon. Hope you all enjoy and feel free to help me out around here. I'm still a rookie.
- Kayla




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Hallo, Kayla! Welcome to YWS. We don't bite. (Well, some of us do, but that's a select few. xD)

I hope you have a nice time here - there's a lot of stuff to do, so you definitely won't get bored. There are the Storybooks, reviewing, submitting, chatting... trust me, there's a lot. Once you start, you really can't stop, trust me.

A lot of people on this site are here to help with spelling, grammar and punctuation as well as overall content, so never fear! (I'm one of them, of course, but my blows can be a bit heavy-handed at times.)

This has been a lame hello, but hello! Hope you have a nice time here. ^^
stay off the faerie paths




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Hey there Kayla, I'm C *Gives a hug*

Welcome to YWS :D

YWS is a community of friendly and helpful writers, who had dedicated their free time into writing and helping others improve their writing. So, you'll find lots of people willing to give their opinion on your writing as well as point out the parts which needs improvement. Also, as this is one of the friendliest sites of the internet, you won't be ignored or cast aside. The minute you step inside YWS, you become a part of our group will be accepted as such. :D

You'd soon become hooked to YWS, as it's quite addictive. With the points, badges and stars that you can earn, it'd be quite a surprise if you don't become addicted. But, don't worry. Because all this, increases your interest in writing and improves your writing skills.

Now, let me go over some helpful things,

If you want to request a review, you can post a request in a thread here. I'll be happy to review your work. Just send me a PM or post a request in my thread and I'll do my best to review it.

If you have any questions, you can PM one of the moderators (people in green) or post the question in this thread

If you are bored, you can visit the lounge or games to have some sort of discussions or just plain fun. :D

There's one part of the forum that, for me, is more fun that any other. That's the "Storybook RPGs" This is where you join a storybook, make a character and contribute to the storybook using your character. The story is written and developed by several users, and the plot changes on the fly. To me, this is more fun that writing a story alone. Because you get to experience different views and ideas by several people.

Now, that's most of what needs to be said, because exploring can gain you a lot more information that what I say.

So, I hope you have fun here at YWS. If you have any questions, PM me. :D

- C -
Warden: "If you want to lead, all you have to do is ask."
Alistair: "What? Lead? Me? No, no, no. No leading. Bad things happen when I lead. We get lost, people die, and the next thing you know I'm stranded somewhere without any pants."
- Dragon Age

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Hallo! :smt039 Welcome aboard! I'm Searria, or Sea if you like. :D

Ooo! Grammer! I, like several other members, am obsessed with grammar. :D If you ever need help on that, you will have no trouble finding someone to help you here. :D

Now, I must ask you some very important questions. *nods seriously*
:arrow: What's your favourite colour?
:arrow: What's your favourite dessert?
:arrow: What's your favourite smilie on YWS so far?
:arrow: What are some of your hobbies outside of writing and reading?

There. Now we can proceed. ;)

If you have any questions, you can ask pretty much anyone on the site. Never feel like you're bothering any of us. We absolutely love helping newbies. :D You can also go to the Answers to Questions Everyone Has thread. If that doesn't cover it, you can also request a buddy from The Buddy System. A buddy will answer all of your questions, review your work, and just be completely awesome. ;) They're always excited to get new mentorees, so don't be shy!

If you ever need anything, feel free to let me know. Happy writing! :elephant:
-Sea-
'Let's eat Grandma!' or, 'Let's eat, Grandma!' Punctuation saves lives.

Reviews? You know you want one. :)

*Ribbit*



If you can't describe what you are doing as a process, you don't know what you're doing.
— W. Edwards Deming