this was quite an interesting an unique poem but i quite liked it.the choice of words were really something different than what ive read which makes it even better.nice job
Good writing. Ok, I'll just highlight a few areas that I think needs correction: " In (anaphase) of hers- the word for the scientific division of cells felt kind of awkward for this poem The 'I's should definitely be capitalized as well as the first words of all the lines. " as if to fur or jeans-( I don't see the need for the dash here), the same follows for the third line in the second stanza. The word 'feyly' used in the fourth stanza, last line, I checked it up in the dictionary and couldn't find a meaning.
'when I'm gone, my words will remain... your word is a weapon, either of destruction or re-construction, whatever you make of it, It's your choice.'
This review is a completely pointless review whose purpose is to be a review only in characters because nobody can rightly review a piece that has been deleted, and seeing as how this piece has been in the Works with 1 Review queue for quite some time, standing in the way of bringing the count in said queue down to zero, here I am giving this a non-review review to knock it out of the queue.
Consider this a review IOU for one work of any form, to be redeemed whenever you wish.
