Chubby anime girl

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Okay... I think I shouldn't use paint next time. The eyes look vicious! I've used color pencils in her face and neck. The rest is done by paint. The out lining is, at some places, done with paint while at other places it's done with black color pencil.

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Yep! I'll just stick to color pencils. :)
Last edited by Twinkle4ever on Mon Aug 29, 2011 3:39 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Amazing piece of artwork, it seems that anime drawing is definately your style. The use of tone is fantastic and the colours are realistic and well controlled. Dont forget to experiment with other techniques and styles. Next time maybe try adding further detail, such as; freckles, moles or scars (if necessary).

But overall, fantastic! Keep up the good work
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This is a master-piece :D

It's pretty, cute, chubby and definitely awesome! xD
Drawing is you're style! especially anime!

The colors you've used are really fantastic and it's not even to be known you used paint! :O
Seriously, you've got some good hands there! ^^

Keep Drawing & Let me when you submit another one :)

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Love it!! There a pretty much no flaws. The lines are very clean and simple, and overall it's just a great piece of work! I don't see what you mean about the eyes being viscious, I think the black paint makes them stand out beautifully, and they aren't too dark as well. I like how you colored her eyes grey and not some overly bright color, it makes her look more natural, i think. I also like the shape of the eyes, they aren't humungous or anything x)

I think you did a great job with the hair, too. I think you draw it the same way I do. You color it in the direction the hair it going, which is very important. That way, the strands don't look blocky and unnatural. I can see that you understand where the hair separates into different sections. You also added darker shading to the hair behind her neck, which is a good thing too ^_^

The blush was a lovely effect :)

So I really don't have any critiques for you, except keep drawing and improving on your own! :D
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Wow! This is just adorable! :)
The only nit-pick I have is her lack of eyebrows. Eyebrows add so much expression...why leave them out? Also they make the person look more natural.
Other than that though, this is fantastic! Her eyes look especially good...sometimes when people draw anime they make the eyes overbearingly huge and shiny. These are perfect. Great job. :)




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Hey there Twinkle! Your drawing is absolutely amazing! Actually, I see no errors in your drawing; it is well-drawn, the colors are lovely. Honestly, you rock at drawing anime :D

1. You have mentioned something about the eyes, saying that they're looking vicious. The problem is that the eyes in your drawing are all colored in dark grey and the eye pupils are not dark enough. So, I've just placed this picture for a better explanation.
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(Sorry the picture is too large) Try to focus on the eyes, see the upper part of the eye lenses is dark grey while the lower part of the lenses is light grey. See that different degrees in grey along with the dark eye pupils all make the eyes sparkle.

2. I have one more comment on the hair. I know that you've used paint for coloring it but try to highlight some of it especially the edges with a darker brown colour. (See the ref. in this pic)

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sarahjane97 wrote:The only nit-pick I have is her lack of eyebrows. Eyebrows add so much expression...why leave them out? Also they make the person look more natural.
<< agree, don't forget the eye brows.

I'd love to see more of your Anime drawings. Great job :D
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