My Heart

My heart,
It bleeds for you,
Until it bleeds no more.
Deep down I know we never can be.
So slowly,
I'll fade away.
But in my heart I will never,
Ever,
Forget you.

I love it!! It's so simple and yet filled with emotion. I wished it was longer, but I realized if it was it wouldn't be quite as good. I have a few comments, so here they are.

My heart,
It bleeds for you.I think it would flow better if you had something other than a period here. Maybe a semicolon?
Until it bleeds no more.
Because deep down Possibly add a line break here?I know we never can be.
So slowly,
I'll fade away.
But in my heart I will never,
Ever,I love the never, ever. It adds such a touch of forever, of determination. It's like in a way you capture the whole poem with this line.
Forget you.

I love this poem, though very precise, you kept it simple and the message was clear.
The punctuations in this few lines need correcting though
"My heart,
It bleeds for you,
Until it bleeds no more."
Good Job.

such a short poem but, it speak a thousand words which make it a great poem. continuing writing and keep up the good work.

Wow.
*APPLAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAUUUUUUSE!!**
Poems like this show that if they message it conveys is strong enough, it doesn't matter the length. It doesn't matter whether the words are long or small as long as the message is big!

I have some words on it, though.

Because deep down I know we never can be.

I think you should eliminate the because.

So slowly,
I'll fade away.

I think you should put 'So slowly, I fade away.'

That's pretty much all I have to say on it. And that's only IF I had to edit it. Editing yourself could help you make the message stronger, or, it could take away from the feeling in it.
Those are just some minor things but honestly, don't edit anything. I think it's great.

Love,
Ang