The moon!

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Hello! Another photo for everyone to have a look at. Please, feel free to give me advice, etc.

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That'd make a nice wallpaper. :)
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The picture if very lovely, but I'm not really feeling the quote. It's one that I have heard too many times before.
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I like it...good for a desktop wallpaper or a poster :D It's simple but it already has it all. Sometimes, simplicity is really the best choice.

Um...just one question: "amoung?" I don't think that's the correct spelling but I know it's just a typographical error :D You could improve it next time by checking your work twice :D
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It made me smile, that's for sure :D
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Hi there! So, nicely done, great picture-- the moon can be especially hard to capture without turning it into one huge piece of bokeh. However, I must say that something is kind of irking me about your picture; the focus. The focal point is entirely on your quote, with no thought give to the moon. I'd say change the proportions, maybe crop the moon closer if the quality is up to it, and reduce the size of the font. Obviously, for the site's sake, we were given a smaller version so it may just be the condensed size doing this, but... just a thought. Great job, regardless. :)




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It was very sweet, as a motivational poster/wallpaper. Try a comma: Shoot for the moon, if you miss you will be among the stars.

Liked it :D
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I really like the quote. :)
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I'm assuming you have access to an image editing software, since you added text.
I would suggest removing the vestigial traces of the circular moon that are still apparent in this picture. Try to sharpen the edges of the crescent curve, and increase the contrast, and you have a wallpaper image.
All in all this is a pretty good basic image.
One other point: the quote. It's one of those quotes that sound great but are completely incorrect. Stars are balls of fire light years away from us. Missing the moon would definitely no put you amongst the stars.
Also, your choice of font is quite good.
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I LOVE this, it’s really beautiful! I like the text you edited on it, and like the others said this would make an awesome wallpaper/screen saver.
Well done and keep it up :)
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