Although I like this for it being all about Bobby (who's somuchwin), I do think you could make it look better. I like the old paper/parchmenty thing used, and it's good; but, I'd like some difference. A lot of SPN art have this background, so it'd be wonderful if you could work with something else. Love the font and jaggedy edges!
~Lava
~ Pretending in words was too tentative, too vulnerable, too embarrassing to let anyone know. - Ian McEwan in Atonement
I shouldn't even comment on this because B should have been Belthazar, clearly. But I suppose I ought to say something about the piece itself. Just know that I am not a happy kitty.
I think the paper background could have been a little more exciting. True it looks old but I'd love to see a few burn marks or morre creases or made even a few stains aand things. Then the jaged edges are a little too neat in plces, especially on the right hand side it seems. Maybe make the text a colour that stands out more? It blends in a little too well right now. Even just a slightly darker sshade would work. A nice choice of pictures though and of course I love this project you're doing so you get kudos for that. Pluss! Since it's just for fun I'm sure we can cut you some slack, though it still should totally have been Balthazar!
