I Haven't Thought Of a Title for This Piece Yet :(

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It's good...kinda hard to get the point of it, but I like it. It's good how you said "inch by inch by inch" when typically people say "inch by inch", but it added originality, a personal touch. Your lines and wording are excellent.

A bit rough but well-worded and interesting. Great job

That was good, it had a lot of questions. I agree with Shakyll, I loved the inch by inch by inch. I thought the line that just said "they" was kind of out of place. Although, I don't know if all the questions at the end had anything to do with the beginning. I feel like you could have written a story-poem using the first part, but instead you just ended it with seemingly random questions. But, I still liked it.

It wasnt really my style but the lines and wording was great. I mean i dont really see a reason or point in it but it could work for some people. Good job