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Hello =]. There are only a few things I would change with this. and those would be the length of the girls nose and the eyes on the boy. The skulls are perfect though. I think the bottom lip of the girl could be a little more full, just to make it pop a bit more. Other than that, nicely done =]
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Wow, a lot of expression here! The curtained face, the crushed flower, the girl standing rigid amid a pile of skulls. I think the pink shirt set the mood of the piece a little off, but other than that, I think you did well!

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