So pretty! I think you draw hands better than I do x) The only thing I didn't like was the vertical line of his shirt where it meets his pants. Honestly, on first glance, I thought it was his but crack xD Body proportions = magnifico! Facial expression on the girl = marvelous! Maybe you could add a bit more detail to the dress? A bit of lace or frill? Overall, gorgeous! I really love this! Keep drawing! black
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Hey, Nice work! Quite pretty, it reminds me of Zefferelli's Romeo and Juliet, one of the best adaptations of the play. Although the image looks a little fuzzy, maybe find some other way of getting your artwork onto the internet. Though I do kind of like the effect, reminds me of some lino cuts someone did.
Anyway, the basic figures and perceptive are quite good. You foreshortening the feet quite nicely and over all it is well balanced so kudos to you. The figures, to me, also seem to be well scaled, not perfect but very well done. To me the fine details, that could really make this amazing are missing. The hair could be more refined and the top of the hand is not a flat line, the fingers are different lengths, look at your own hand for reference.
But really you have the basics down very well, it will take time and practice to get or even notice the need for more detail. Your use to line is also very good.
Hi there! I like this picture! The hands touching reminded me of Sweet Caroline, I just wanted to say that part. The couple already gave me a big picture of the Capulet's Ball! Lively music, pleasent food, and people enjoying themselves! I really like your drawing! Although, the picture is a little fuzzy, I still like it! Good job and keep it up!
