Make me....I dare you

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Jas
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Fri Feb 25, 2011 11:01 pm
Jas says... · Fri Feb 25, 2011 11:01 pm
I was GOING TO ask you to review something.

But I felt bad. So I decided not to :D




~Your idol.
I am nothing
but a mouthful of 'sorry's, half-hearted
apologies that roll of my tongue, smoothquick, like 'r's
or maybe like pocket candy
that's just a bit too sweet.

~*~




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Jas
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Mon Mar 28, 2011 3:36 am
Jas says... · Mon Mar 28, 2011 3:36 am
*technically* this is not only mine. So I can guilt-free ask you to review it.


So.

Review this topic78266.html please? THANKS SO MUCH HOPE I MADE YOU A SHRINE NEVER FORGET THE SHRINE

~Jas
I am nothing
but a mouthful of 'sorry's, half-hearted
apologies that roll of my tongue, smoothquick, like 'r's
or maybe like pocket candy
that's just a bit too sweet.

~*~




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Riveneye
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Fri Apr 01, 2011 2:33 am
Riveneye says... · Fri Apr 01, 2011 2:33 am
Hey I'm back for 3rds or 4ths I think.
I need a few good reviews on these stories so I can edit them.

#1 http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?t=78099
#2 viewtopic.php?t=78101

Well Good luck and I hope you'll review this.
Fiction flight is almost here. Check us out on Facebook http://www.facebook.com/pages/Fiction-Flight/130489243696865
(yea we don't have a website casue we can't think of a publishing name yet.)




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Explosive_Pen
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Sat Jun 11, 2011 12:05 am
Explosive_Pen says... · Sat Jun 11, 2011 12:05 am
Hiya, Hope!
Could you please review my poem for me? topic82203.html
Thanks so much in advance =]
"You can love someone so much...But you can never love people as much as you can miss them."

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