The Drawing Board

I'm new, so I'm really open to review anything that takes me less than an hour to read.
If you want me to look at style more than plot or theme analysis, just specify.
My strengths have been in narratives and speeches, but I've dabbled in just about everything.

Hello!
if you want to review my poem
post916429.html?hilit=clouds#p916429

it is called "Clouds" and is about writers block [genre narrative poem]
Thanks, Oliver