An Abstract Life: Windy Hearts

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This was shaded in pencil, then edited on the computer.
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Last edited by Daisuki on Mon May 16, 2011 1:33 am, edited 1 time in total.
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Brilliant coloring I would like to say, first. Secondly, when posting art and such, it would be really great if you posted what media you used =]. A lot of people don't, but it helps a lot when looking at something to know what the artist used. overall, I think this is pretty desc. My one qualm would be with the left character, his face seems to be a little too short for the length of his neck. it's such a minuscule detail that a lot of people probably don't notice. Overall good work =] Coloring is excellent.
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oh O_O I made one for your story a while ago :/ but I was to embarrassed to show it >-< I'll upload it to facebook in a bit




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Wow, that's really amazing! I love how the colors flow with each other! I don't see much for improvement. But the chin on the left is a bit small, I guess. I don't see anything wrong with it at all. It's really cool! It's almost like a river of colors. Though, how come the left person is shaded in with the colors, but the other person on the right isn't? I think it's better to shade both of them in, or outline the colors. Unless it's suppose to be like that, then don't dare to listen to me. So anyways, it's so....colorful [:
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I don't know who these people are, but I love, love, love this!! XD Is it from something you watched, or is it something that you wrote yourself? Well, either way, I love these characters and their expressions. Especially the character on the right. S/he (?) looks so happy-go-lucky (a little clumsy, because of the bandage) but they both just look so cute! :3

Okay, now to go into nit-picky detail!

The person on the left: This person, I think, is the weak point in the picture (but since there's very little wrong with him, you should take that as a compliment ;P) First of all, I like his facial expression because it's nice and relaxed, but his face isn't big enough. I understand that it's half covered, as well as turned slightly, but it just seems like 1. The neck is too long for that sized head, and 2. The second eye doesn't seem like it would be able to fit, if it wasn't covered with hair. It's just a narrow head, in general, and you should probably watch out for that in the future. A tip for this would be to imagine your character with his full face showing, and visualize the positions so you can get the proportions right.

The person on the right: Oh my gosh I absolutely adore this person!! X3 I find mostly nothing wrong with it. The facial expression is perfect and the proportioning is absolutely trophy worthy! The ONLY thing I'm a little hesitant about is the fact that I have no idea what gender this person is. The problem with drawing young boys and girls, is that they usually vaguely look alike, especially with medium length hair. I think that it might be a girl, because there's a slight hint of breasts at the bottom of the picture. Am I correct? If it is a girl, then yay! But if it's a boy, you should probably fix that section O.o

All in all: I absolutely adored this piece!! Totally and completely love it! :3 I'm also impressed with the colors as well as the shading. Oh my gosh, the rainbow colors.... FRICKEN FANTASTIC!! I love them so much. HOW DID YOU DO IT?!?! And if I may ask, what program did you use, and how did you use it? :3 I'm amazed. It works so well, ne? :3
Keep it up! Keep it up! XD <3
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