Always

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I will always be there for you,
No matter what,
That’s what I will do,

I will never leave you alone,
You will always have me at your side,
It doesn’t matter what happens,

When I said,
“Til death do us part.”,
I meant it,

And if death does manage,
To rip us apart,
I will always,
Always,

Find a way back to you,
So you will always have me at your side,
To comfort you,
To hold you,
To lull you to sleep,
I will never leave.
"Me I'm dishonest but a dishonest man you can always trust to be dishonest. Honestly its the honest ones you have to watch out for because you can never tell when they are going to do something incredibly...stupid." ~Capt. Jack Sparrow




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Hey horses!!!

Looks like I'm reviewing for ya today XD. Ok first of all absolutely LOVED this greatly. I loved this I just say it might be longer...add more details or something lol....not really sure it just seemed a little short but it's fine just as it is XD. I didn't find anything wrong with the grammar so I can't critique that. So I shall say I loved it and can't wait to read more. Keep up the good work and Buenas Suerte. Happy Writing.
Soulkana<3
May the gentle moon take you into peaceful dreams. May the mighty sun brighten your new days.




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Heyo there =]. So this piece had a good message, the normal love scene. The execution was a bit sloppy though. The flow was just really choppy and for a short poem its noticeable. So I like it =] but just change the wording a bit maybe. Luck!
TylynTyrannosaurus<3 (tydecker777)



It's unsettling to know how little separates each of us from another life altogether.
— Wes Moore, The Other Wes Moore