Well, this story did not make all that much sense, but maybe I did not start from the beginning. Over all, it was well written and the grammar was very accurate. I do want to comment of the "a thousand G's and L's", though. I realise it's a figure of speech, but both letters only had three words. Then again... I suppose 'man of three G's' doesn't sound very impressive... Good work, otherwise.
You'd better wise up, Pony... you get tough like me and you don't get hurt. You look out for yourself and nothing can touch you, man. — Dallas Winston, The Outsiders
