deleted

2 posts
User avatar
fight4whatisright
Gender None specified
Points 997
Reviews 32
Tue Apr 05, 2011 7:10 am
fight4whatisright says... · Tue Apr 05, 2011 7:10 am
...
Last edited by fight4whatisright on Mon Jul 11, 2011 10:07 am, edited 2 times in total.
Quote




User avatar
borntobeawriter
Supporter
Gender Female
Points 30411
Reviews 771
Tue Apr 05, 2011 4:56 pm
borntobeawriter says... · Tue Apr 05, 2011 4:56 pm
Hey there Fighta,

Well, now I'm really confused. I was going to read this because it's got no reviews, but I know I've read this before. Have you edited?

Well, I don't have any nitpicks. I thought this was good, the action and dialogue flowed well.

I was slightly confused at the beginning, but I quickly back into the skin of the MC. Kudos to you for that.

Let me know when you post more, okay?

Tanya
Quote

2 posts


You unlock this door with the key of imagination. Beyond it is another dimension: a dimension of sound, a dimension of sight, a dimension of mind. You’re moving into a land of both shadow and substance, of things and ideas. You’ve just crossed over into… the Twilight Zone.
— Rod Serling