I think all of us have those times when we don't know what to do with our lives anymore. We're scared of being alone, even if we say we're not, we are. We're scared that nothing will ever be enough. We're all just so paranoid. We want love, so we wait for it, we want people to care, so we wait for it. We keep waiting for things to happen in our lives. Don't you ever think that a day will come when we get tired of waiting? so stop sitting there, acting like this is all you're going to get in life. Stop waiting for something spectacular to happen. Because it wont. Not unless you make it happen. People keep saying they want a change in this world, and that no one is doing anything about it. Well, have you ever thought that We are the ones that need to make that change? it's time to stand up,look past all of our mistakes, look past the insanity. Run outside and scream. Yell at the world and everyone in it! Say I'm tired of living like this, I'm tired of thinking that this is what life is. I'm tired of being angry and I'm tired of being sad. Be inspired and inspire others. Inspire yourself to be yourself. Go crazy and stay crazy. I'm tired of people telling me they're depressed and angry, because in my eyes, those are all lies. You're just paranoid and don't know what to do because your confused about life. Just live life! Live it to the fullest, because everyone else is scared to. Live life and love it! Because that is really what we were made to do. we all try so hard in life to live up to other peoples expectations, do you know what it's like to be real? Open Your Eyes. It's time to see what you've been avoiding all of your life....
There are a couple of typos in there, so really make sure you proofread before you post!
As far as the content goes, the next logical thing you should discuss is what life is composed of. That way, you can encourage people to start living their lives as fully as they want.
Ubi caritas est vera, Deus ibi est.
"The mark of your ignorance is the depth of your belief in injustice and tragedy. What the caterpillar calls the end of the world, the Master calls the butterfly." ~ Richard Bach
I have a few suggestions/questions, so here they are: 1.) Was this meant to be a rant? Because if it was, then the topic-jumping would be appropriate. Rants are all about topic-jumping. 2.) Writing is all about expressing yourself. You certainly expressed yourself in this piece. Some people would criticize this type of writing though, because the reader may feel pressured to act, feel, or think a certain way. Possibly make the tone of the story less...pushy? 3.) ^I know Snoink already pointed out the typos, but these are the specific ones I would edit. ^.^
Open Your Eyes. It's time to see what you've been avoiding all of your life....
I don't think "Your Eyes" should be capitalized. You're not talking about a proper noun and it isn't the beginning of a new sentence. Also, for your ending sentence the "..." seems unnecessary. Your writing style comes off as firm, so I would end this with either a period or an exclamation point. These are just suggestions, so it's completely optional. Hope this helped!
