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Last edited by SmylinG on Tue Nov 15, 2011 4:20 am, edited 3 times in total.
Paul is my little, evil, yellow bundle of joy.




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It looks pretty good, but I feel like it's missing something. It feels to. . . Soft. Maybe more lines or more shading? You did a really good job on the shape and the shading you did, though. They look realistic. On the left hand there is a clear upper line of the hand but it's missing on the right, the right's all shading. and what are the circles on the bottom?
Light one candle instead of cursing the darkness.




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Hey, "Funkymomo", thanks for the comment on my art piece. You were wondering what those circles on the bottom were xD.. I thought that was funny. Those were unintended shadows from taking the picture. And as for the softness of the sketch, I also noticed this. It was a much sharper drawing on paper than in photograph. That always seems to happen when I photograph my art. But what can you do? :) I don't mind the criticism. Everyone sees art in a different way. So it's best not to dwell on what others see as imperfections. But I do appreciate your comment. It always means a lot to hear what people think.
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I think maybe adding a ring on his hand may add some spice to the drawing or something like that, but it looks good!



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